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#FridayFotoFiction: The Handy Man

“Fixed, auntyji” he shouted, “Now this one will not trouble you again.”

Aparna was glad that Subhash had come over at such short notice or by now her house would be flooded. “Thanks, Subhash, I don’t know what I would do if not for you.”

This was the fourth time auntyji had called Subhash to her 24th floor apartment. Sometimes it was the fan that wasn’t turning, the leaking taps or the wobbling table. He was a bit fed up with this old lady who felt she had a right over him, just because she had lent him money to buy his bike.

Aparna was glad that Subhash came to visit regularly. Abhi had forgotten her 75th birthday while he was busy living his American dream. She offered Subhash some cake, “It’s pineapple, my favourite. Take some for Munni.”

Subhash fumbled, making sure the diamond-studded watch didn’t fall out of his pocket while he took the box auntyji offered.

#FridayFotoFiction

Word Count: 159

Tina Basu

This piece is part of #FridayFotoFiction with Tina Mayuri.

16 Comments

  1. Mayuri Nidigallu

    This handyman certainly had his hands full!
    Love your portrayal of the different shades of life.
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

    • mommyingbabyt

      Thank you Mayuri

  2. NEEL ANIL PANICKER

    Liked the twist at the end. He seems to living his Big Indian Dream. Good story, Nayantara.

    • mommyingbabyt

      Sad but true

    • mommyingbabyt

      Thank you for stopping by

  3. Anagha Yatin

    Handy man seems to be better at some other tricks as well! Interesting twist at the end!

    Anagha recently posted Long Lost Star

    • mommyingbabyt

      No one is black and white it would seem ?

  4. Ashlesha

    I like the unexpected element at the end. Good Tara

    • mommyingbabyt

      Thanks for dropping by Ashlesha. Glad you liked it.

  5. Akshata

    A wicked man he is .

    • mommyingbabyt

      Who? The handy man or the son ?

  6. Meha

    Great take on the prompt. Poor woman…

  7. Opinionated Mua

    Interesting take on the prompt! Weaving two stories and lives together. Awesome 🙂

  8. Tina Basu

    ohh god… its sad reality actually, people leave their parents alone, they rely on others and they cheat them. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.

  9. Lucie

    What a heartwarming story of friendship and kindness!

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